Monday, June 23, 2014

Scene Details for Sample

SPIDER ENCOUNTER: PART II

Note: This is a rough draft of a scene. Will likely change names, dialogue, and certain details as needed.

MIN parts drawn for project: Shots 18-31

1. Focus Shot: Small bird like creature flying

2. Action Shot: Bird is suddenly stabbed through by long appendage.

3.Horizon Line distance shot: Spider creature stilting on stretched legs. One appendage is stretched upwards, indicating its involvement in bird’s death.
SFX: *7 *7 *7 *7 *7 *7

4. Group shot: GRAVES, MIA, and ROCKO huddled around computer.
ROCKO: See? No way we’ll get past that thing!
MIA: It hasn’t moved from that spot since we entered the silo. Even if it can’t get us in here, it’s not letting us leave.
GRAVES: Biggs, did you find anything that looks useful?
5. Side Shot to Biggs on his hand radio, looking up
BIGGS: There’s an old loader unit here for mounting cruise missiles. Its pretty beat up, buuut I think we might be able to use it.
6. Angle shot at Loader Mech
GRAVES (radio): What are you thinking?
BIGGS: We can mount one of these warheads to the unit’s self destruct trigger, then charge the Loader right into the side of that creature. After that, all we have to do is hit the kill switch and watch that spider burn, if we’re lucky.
ROCKO: Easier said than done. The remote sensor looks whacked. Someone would have to drive it.

7. Shot of BIGGS looking at mech.
BIGGS: Not a problem. The Loader’s still hooked up to a recovery winch. If we unlock the RPM governor, we could use it to extract the pilot.
ROCKO (radio): And break his damn spine in half! Who the hell would try that?

8. BIGGS: I will. The rear hatch panel comes right off, I can ride it all the way back to the garage.
   ROCKO (radio): You’re out of your mind!
   GRAVES (radio): We’re out of options. Getting to that convoy is our top priority.
Do what you have to Biggs.


9. Garage door shut
10. Garage door opening.
SFX: ^/ ^/ ^/ ^/ ^/ ^/

11. Front shot of Loader Mech

12. Cabin shot of BIGGS.
BIGGS: I’m moving out.
MIA (radio): Confirmed. No reaction from target.
13. Shot of treads kicking up dust
14. Rear shot of mech moving towards Spider Creature

15. Creature turns head to face Loader unit.
SFX OWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOO
MIA (radio): Target is responding.

16. Rear shot of Loader mech. Spider Creature leaps out of view of panel
SFX H:H:H:H:H:H:H:H:
MIA (radio): Shit!

17. Action Shot, Spider has leapt onto front of Loader Unit
SFX KYYYRRRRRR

18. View of Spider’s face through display monitor
SFX OWWOOOOOOOOOOO

19.  Shot of GRAVES, MIA, and ROCKO around monitor
ROCKO: Shit that thing’s fast!
20. Cabin Shot of BIGGS at controls of mech

21. Shot of Loader raising 1 arm

22. Shot of Loader’s raised arm grabbing Spider’s head, lower arms reaching back

23. Zoom of lower arm blade going into Spider’s side
SFX OWWWOOOOOOOOO

24.  Shot of GRAVES
GRAVES: IT’S LATCHED! DO IT!

25. Shot of BIGGS hitting kill switch and raising arm to release latch

26. BIGG’s hand on release latch.

27. BIGGS pulls release Latch
SFX CHNK

28. View of Rear Panel w/ steam shooting out
SFX FSSHHHH

29. BIGGS is ejected from Loader.

30. Shot of Rear Panel w/ BIGGS shooting towards viewer.

31. Explosion, w/ BIGGS still being pulled towards viewer.

END SCENE

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